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 | | Subject: Shujinkou Katsui Sun May 15, 2011 12:49 am | |
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Name:Shujinkou Katsui
Description: Katsui was born after the dawn had come from a dryad who seduced a traveling merchant of the monarchy. He was raised for the first ten years of his life amongst the wilds of the forest before his mother in a pique of fay spite for her son sent him off too the land of his father. He would arrive in the monarchy with just the clothes on his back and barely any knowledge of how human society worked. Katsui was quickly drawn into a life of crime because of his naivete, and he would learn that the rules of man were not so different then the laws he knew from the years he had grown up in the forest tended by his fay mother. He would endure this lifestyle before the law finally caught up too him. The typical punishment for thieves was the severing of the right hand, but a miracle would save Katsui and his hand. Queen Siena was there presiding as the magistrate, and before he met the axe the Queen would spare him from that grizzly fate, with a choice of either working for the monarchy or taking his rightful punishment. It wasn't much of a choice. He would work for the monarchy and root out her enemies wherever they might be.
Personality: Katsui is a man of action as he learned from his mother that words meant little if they were not backed by action, this belief was further tempered by his life on the street where honeyed words were undercut by the harsh realities and words, even the mercy of the Queen enforced this into him. He will do anything he thinks would help the monarchy and himself along the way.
Personal motto: Always strive for perfection, but settle for excellence.
Base Race: human
Sub Race: half-elemental (light)
Affinity: Wood
» Themes:
Demographic
Default Location: Medius
Battle Record
Wins: 0
- Opponent
Kills: 0
- Opponent
Losses: 0
- Opponent
Draws: 0
- Opponent
Lifestyle
Affiliation: Mare Maris Monarchy
Job: servant
» Class: low
» Pay: low
housing: low
transportation: horse
Inventory
Barter Items
- 00: Very Common
- 00: Common
- 00: Uncommon
- 00: Rare
- 00: Very Rare
- 00: Exceptionally Rare
- 00: Priceless
Equipment
-Bo staff
Storage
- None | Development
Level (SL): 0 [ 0 / 200,000 ]
EXP: 0
TEXP: 0
JC: 0
PWC: 0 (organization: Mare Maris Organization)
pSP: 0
mSP: 0
Health: 100%
Stamina: 100%
Attributes
Strength: Average [+0.0]
Intelligence: Average [+0.0]
Defense: Average [+0.0]
Aegis: Average [+0.0]
Movement: Average [+0.0]
Dexterity: Average [+0.0]
Transformations
Slot 1: (Transformation Name)
- (Description)
Slot 2: (Transformation Name)
- (Description)
Slot 3: (Transformation Name)
- (Description)
Special Abilities
- Barter [Novice]
- Flight
-Spiritually Awareness
- possessed strength (locked)
Quest and Saga Abilities
(Quest or Saga Name)
-
Physical Techs
(Package Name | Boosted mSP value)
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Magical Techs
(Package Name | Boosted pSP value)
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Kuritikaru
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Participation
Sagas
»
Quests Completed
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Character Notes
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Last edited by Shintre on Tue May 31, 2011 12:13 pm; edited 9 times in total (Reason for editing : finished) | |
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Shintre
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| | Subject: Re: Shujinkou Katsui Tue May 17, 2011 8:51 pm | |
| the only thing that concerns me is that ur story has you beyond the site's time line
it's been 20 yrs since TD
the queen was elected 5 yrs later
i guess give them a yr or to to get set up good and then ur born
so you spend 10 yrs in the forest that puts us at 15 AD
add the 7 yrs u mention and we're at 22 or greater
i'd suggest being in the forest for bout 5 yrs and being in maru for 5
or just take out the specific time dates
that should have you straight.
fix that, get rid of the unneeded stuff in parenthesis (i.e. under charcter notes) and ur good | |
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| | Subject: Re: Shujinkou Katsui Tue May 17, 2011 9:27 pm | |
| removed the time reference for going too the monarchy, and got rid of the parenthesis. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Shujinkou Katsui Thu May 26, 2011 7:29 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Shujinkou Katsui Sat May 28, 2011 2:09 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Shujinkou Katsui Sat May 28, 2011 2:10 am | |
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Name:Shujinkou Katsui
Description: Katsui was born after the dawn had come from a dryad who seduced a traveling merchant of the monarchy. He was raised for the first ten years of his life amongst the wilds of the forest before his mother in a pique of fay spite for her son sent him off too the land of his father. He would arrive in the monarchy with just the clothes on his back and barely any knowledge of how human society worked. Katsui was quickly drawn into a life of crime because of his naivete, and he would learn that the rules of man were not so different then the laws he knew from the years he had grown up in the forest tended by his fay mother. He would endure this lifestyle before the law finally caught up too him. The typical punishment for thieves was the severing of the right hand, but a miracle would save Katsui and his hand. Queen Siena was there presiding as the magistrate, and before he met the axe the Queen would spare him from that grizzly fate, with a choice of either working for the monarchy or taking his rightful punishment. It wasn't much of a choice. He would work for the monarchy and root out her enemies wherever they might be.
Personality: Katsui is a man of action as he learned from his mother that words meant little if they were not backed by action, this belief was further tempered by his life on the street where honeyed words were undercut by the harsh realities and words, even the mercy of the Queen enforced this into him. He will do anything he thinks would help the monarchy and himself along the way.
Personal motto: Always strive for perfection, but settle for excellence.
Base Race: human
Sub Race: half-elemental (light)
Affinity: Wood
» Themes:
Demographic
Default Location: Medius
Battle Record
Wins: 0
- Opponent
Kills: 0
- Opponent
Losses: 0
- Opponent
Draws: 0
- Opponent
Lifestyle
Affiliation: Mare Maris Monarchy
Job: Servant
» Class: Role 1
» Pay: Very Common
housing: Low Class
transportation: Horse
Inventory
Barter Items
- 00: Very Common
- 00: Common
- 00: Uncommon
- 00: Rare
- 00: Very Rare
- 00: Exceptionally Rare
- 00: Priceless
Equipment
- Bo staff
Storage
- None | Development
Level (SL): 7 | [ 13000/200000 ]
EXP: 2127
TEXP: 0
JC: 0
PWC: 2127 (organization: Mare Maris Organization)
pSP: 50
mSP: 0
Health: 100%
Stamina: 100%
Attributes
Strength: Average [+0.0]
Intelligence: Average [+0.0]
Defense: Average [+0.0]
Aegis: Average [+0.0]
Movement: Average [+0.0]
Dexterity: Average [+0.0]
Transformations
Slot 1: (Transformation Name)
- (Description)
Slot 2: (Transformation Name)
- (Description)
Slot 3: (Transformation Name)
- (Description)
Special Abilities
- Barter [Novice]
- Flight
- Spiritually Awareness
- Possessed Strength
Quest and Saga Abilities
(Quest or Saga Name)
- None
Physical Techs
(Martial Arts | Boosted pSP: 50)
- None
(Pole | Boosted pSP: 60)
- Kukishin-ryu (Nine Gods Spirit School) [Novice]
The first school learned to trick and deceive other weapon users and special strikes and techniques gleaned from the two other weapon groups of the school: the naginata and spear.
Effect: STL Stg1. Skill based on level; basis of all pole skills
- Simple Melee (Kukishin-ryu Style) [Novice]
A basic strike using either end of the staff or length.
Effect: DMG Stg1. Damage = Strength + 0
Magical Techs
(Package Name | Boosted mSP: 0)
- None
Kuritikaru
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Participation
Sagas
» None
Quests Completed
» None
Character Notes |
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