The Seat of Pride

then dragon kick is fine
looks like you got some corrections to make on the others

Critical Limit: Heart Attack
Description:
Blood control is one of the main side effects of Jack's experimentation with blood magic. A rather useful ability using this is to create a blood clot in the persons heart. Causing a massive heart attack. ( Deals flat damage 1-100)

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Heart Attack
Blood control is one of the main side effects of Jack's experimentation with blood magic. A rather useful ability, Jack is able to use this to magically create a blood clot in a person's heart causing a massive heart attack. **
Effect: DMG = flat 1-100

** so... how? gimme a description of what jack does when he does this magic. i.e. does he thrust a line of blood that rushes @ the person and invades their heart or does he just kinda stand there and think "heart attack" then the person has one?

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Heart Attack
Blood control is one of the main side effects of Jack's experimentation with blood magic. A rather useful ability, Jack is able to use this to magically create a blood clot in a person's heart causing a massive heart attack. **
Effect: DMG = flat 1-100

** so... how? gimme a description of what jack does when he does this magic. i.e. does he thrust a line of blood that rushes @ the person and invades their heart or does he just kinda stand there and think "heart attack" then the person has one?

Stands there and thinks heart attack >_>. Kinda like how his other blood magic skills work when involving the enemies body. Cept less gushing and more " OH GOD MY CHEST IT BURNS"

ya i thought so
i dun really like that in a crit
i'ma think on it some

Kay <_<

glow or somethin and it should be fine

Heart Attack
Blood control is one of the main side effects of Jack's experimentation with blood magic. A rather useful ability, Jack is able to use this to magically create a blood clot in a person's heart causing a massive heart attack. Doing so however requires great concentration whilst doing so Jack glows a blood red crimson. Reflecting the power of the magic he is using.
Effect: DMG = flat 1-100


There ya go.

| Dark|

Sangromancy ( Penetration)
Description: Blood magic is an extremely difficult breed of dark magic to defend against. The blood used in creating the dark powers usually comes from the user, however it is not limited to it. Advanced users of blood magic can stretch out with their powers and control the blood of others as fuel for their powers. Jack is one such blood mage. By taking hold of his opponents blood, he can break through their defenses against darkness by using their blood to create dark energy that would overwhelm them.
Effects: DMG +0 ( Base INT), MPN ( Stage 4), MDE ( Stage 3)
SP: 775 | Trained: 1500 Honed: 3000 Mastered: 4500 Perfected: 6000

Height of Nhilism
Description: Jack rushes towards an opponent unleashing a devistating punching and clawing combo. Whilst he is doing this however, the claw marks leave upon the opponent a sigil. A magical mark. This mark is infused with Jacks dark energies. And upon his command...can be unleashed upon the opponent for a far more devistating finish.
Effects: DMG ( PHS, STG2 +1) DLY ( STG3) ( DMG, MG, INT+2, STG4), AIM (STG3)
SP: 825 | Trained: 1594 Honed: 3188 Mastered: 4894 Perfected: 6375

Sangromancy ( Penetration)
Description: Blood magic is an extremely difficult breed of dark magic to defend against. The blood used in creating the dark powers usually comes from the user, however it is not limited to it. Advanced users of blood magic can stretch out with their powers and control the blood of others as fuel for their powers. Jack is one such blood mage. By taking hold of his opponents blood, he can break through their defenses against darkness by using their blood to create dark energy that would overwhelm them.
Effects: DMG +0 ( Base INT), MPN ( Stage 4), MDE ( Stage 3)
SP: 775 | Trained: 1500 Honed: 3000 Mastered: 4500 Perfected: 6000

* you understand that the MPN applies to this attack and not all dark attacks durin the mode, right? this doesn't tell me anything. it states something that you made up about blood magic (not on the site, but w/e). what does jack do to cast this and what happens w/&during this spell?

Height of Nhilism
DMG2 (PHS) DLY3, DMG4 (MG), AIM4
Description: Jack rushes towards an opponent unleashing a devastating punching and clawing combo. Whilst he is doing this however, the claw marks leave upon the opponent a sigil. A magical mark. This mark is infused with Jacks dark energies. And upon his command...can be unleashed upon the opponent for a far more devastating finish.
Effects: Phys DMG = Str + 1, Effect can be delayed up to 3 posts, Mag DMG = INT + 2, Additional Rolls = 1

AIM needs to be at least 4 to do anything. make sure this is right and recalc costs.

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Heart Attack
Blood control is one of the main side effects of Jack's experimentation with blood magic. A rather useful ability, Jack is able to use this to magically create a blood clot in a person's heart causing a massive heart attack. Doing so however requires great concentration whilst doing so Jack glows a blood red crimson. Reflecting the power of the magic he is using.
Effect: DMG = flat 1-100 based on roll

1, Since MDE on MPN was what I was aiming for with this. Discard the tech.
2,
Height of Nhilism
Description: Jack rushes towards an opponent unleashing a devistating punching and clawing combo. Whilst he is doing this however, the claw marks leave upon the opponent a sigil. A magical mark. This mark is infused with Jacks dark energies. And upon his command...can be unleashed upon the opponent for a far more devistating finish.
Effects: DMG ( PHS, STG2 +1) DLY ( STG3) ( DMG, MG, INT+2, STG4), AIM (STG3)
SP: 1150 | Trained: 2625 Honed: 5250 Mastered: 8175 Perfected: 10500

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::Earth::

Twisted Nature
Description: By adapting his tainted senses to the world around him. Jack is capable of sensing movement and location through vibrations in the earth
Effects: SEN ( Stage 4, 40ft)
SP: 500 | Trained: 1250 Honed: 2500 Mastered: 3750 Perfected: 5000


Name:Earth Coffin
Description: Roots, earth and stone rise around the opponent and seal them in under great pressure. The “ Coffin” at this stage sinks into the earth leaving the opponent buried alive.
Effects:
DMG (STG1, Base INT) BND ( STG 2 PHS, Medium) TEL ( STG2, 10ft)
SP: 175 | Trained: 1375 Honed: 2750 Mastered: 4275 Perfected: 5500


Name Titan of Earth
Description:Using stone, soil and roots. Jack crafts a titan of nature standing at the same height as large house( 2 floors) and manipulates it to act on his behalf.
Effects:
OBC+ ( STG 4) ANI (STG4)
SP: 1000 | Trained: 1875 Honed: 3750 Mastered: 5625 Perfected: 7500

::Metal::
NameBane of Arms
Description: Using the power of metal magic, Jack can render the weapons and armour of his opponents useless. If the weapon armour is made of metal Jack can bind it to the floor/wall/ or even keep it stuck in the hilt.
Effects:
BND (STG 2, Medium, magical) MLT ( STG3)
SP: 325 | Trained: 1375 Honed: 2750 Mastered: 4275 Perfected: 5500

Name Sword Titan
Description: Using surrounding metal and metal ore. Jack crafts a female shaped human sized titan armed with a sword with multiple black markings similar to tattoos throughout its body.
Effects:
OBC+ ( STG 2) ANI (STG4)
SP: 575 | Trained: 1625 Honed: 3250 Mastered: 5025 Perfected: 6500

Name:Earth Coffin
Description: Roots, earth and stone rise around the opponent and seal them in under great pressure. The “ Coffin” at this stage sinks into the earth leaving the opponent buried alive.
Effects:
DMG (STG1, Base INT) BND ( STG 2 PHS, Medium) TEL ( STG2, 10ft)
SP: 175 | Trained: 1375 Honed: 2750 Mastered: 4275 Perfected: 5500
((take out roots b/c it’s wood >.> then this is fine))

Name Titan of Earth
Description: Using stone, soil and roots. Jack crafts a titan of nature standing at the same height as large house (2 floors) and manipulates it to act on his behalf.
Effects: OBC+ ( STG 4) ANI (STG4)
SP: 1000 | Trained: 1875 Honed: 3750 Mastered: 5625 Perfected: 7500
((same w/roots here. The only dmg this thing will do is momentum unless you add it in, etc))

NameBane of Arms
Description: Using the power of metal magic, Jack can render the weapons and armour of his opponents useless. If the weapon armour is made of metal Jack can bind it to the floor/wall/ or even keep it stuck in the hilt.
Effects: BND (STG 2, Medium, magical) MLT ( STG3)
SP: 325 | Trained: 1375 Honed: 2750 Mastered: 4275 Perfected: 5500
((magic binds are Mental\Illusion, or Charm\Emotional. This looks/feels more like a physical bind since its preventing someone from moving their weapon.))

Name Sword Titan
Description: Using surrounding metal and metal ore. Jack crafts a female shaped human sized titan armed with a sword with multiple black markings similar to tattoos throughout its body.
Effects:
OBC+ ( STG 2) ANI (STG4)
SP: 575 | Trained: 1625 Honed: 3250 Mastered: 5025 Perfected: 6500
((same thing as titan of earth unless I missed something… which can happen.))

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Name:Earth Coffin
Description: Earth and stone rise around the opponent and seal them in under great pressure. The “ Coffin” at this stage sinks into the earth leaving the opponent buried alive.
Effects:
DMG (STG1, Base INT) BND ( STG 2 PHS, Medium) TEL ( STG2, 10ft)
SP: 175 | Trained: 1375 Honed: 2750 Mastered: 4275 Perfected: 5500

Name Titan of Earth
Description: Using stone and soil Jack crafts a titan of nature standing at the same height as large house (2 floors) and manipulates it to act on his behalf.
Effects: OBC+ ( STG 4) ANI (STG4)
SP: 1000 | Trained: 1875 Honed: 3750 Mastered: 5625 Perfected: 7500
(( Momentum is fine))

NameBane of Arms
Description: Using the power of metal magic, Jack can render the weapons and armour of his opponents useless. If the weapon armour is made of metal Jack can bind it to the floor/wall/ or even keep it stuck in the hilt.
Effects: BND (STG 2, Medium, physical) MLT ( STG3)
SP: 325 | Trained: 1375 Honed: 2750 Mastered: 4275 Perfected: 5500

Name Sword Titan
Description: Using surrounding metal and metal ore. Jack crafts a female shaped human sized titan armed with a sword with multiple black markings similar to tattoos throughout its body.
Effects:
OBC+ ( STG 2) ANI (STG4)
SP: 575 | Trained: 1625 Honed: 3250 Mastered: 5025 Perfected: 6500
( Again Momentum is fine)

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Feral Package
Dragon Talon
Effect: STY(STG1)
Description: Nowadays being in either beast form, or a beastial humanoid form. Jack has trained to fight more with claw and fang.
SP: 25 | Trained: 500 Honed: 1000 Mastered: 1500 Perfected: 2000

Fire Package
Lazerus Fire
Effect: DMG +1 (STG2) ( AOE STG 3)
Description:In dragon form and out, Jack is capable of breathing a fire which scorches all it touches in a wide arc.
SP: 325 | Trained: 1250 Honed: 2500 Mastered: 3750 Perfected: 5000

Psionic

Obstinant Will
Effect:SHLD (STG 2)
Description: Jack erects a mental barrier to protect himself from incoming attacks.
SP: 75 | Trained: 750 Honed: 1500 Mastered: 2250 Perfected: 3000

Mirrored Eyes
Effect: BND( Mental STG 4)
Description: By invading the opponents mind, Jack is able to alter their perceptions. Altering their senses by planting false input, sight, hearing, sometimes even smell and touch to create the perfect mental illusionary cage.
SP: 500 | Trained: 1250 Honed: 2500 Mastered: 3750 Perfected: 5000

Dragon Tongue
Effect: COM ( STG 4)
Description:Jack's practice with the powers of the mind have allowed him to communicate with others over long distances via his mind.
SP: 500 | Trained: 1250 Honed: 2500 Mastered: 3750 Perfected: 5000

|Metal|

Dragon Scales
Effect:SHLD( STG 1) MDE ( STG3)
Description:Jack is capable of using metal magic to enhance his defenses by creating a barrier of metallic dragon scales on his skin.
SP: 275 | Trained: 1250 Honed: 2500 Mastered: 3750 Perfected: 5000

|Void|
Crawling Time
Effect:TFZ- ( STG2) MLT( STG1)
Description: Through distorting time with his magic, Jack is capable of slowing down time at specified points.
SP: 325 | Trained: 1375 Honed: 2750 Mastered: 4275 Perfected: 5500

|Support|
Dragonian Regeneration
Effect: HP+( STG1/HP) HP+ (STG1/STA) MDE ( STG3)
Description:Dragons like most lizards have a capability to regenerate wounds much faster than mammals. By tapping into this power of dragon kin Jack is able to regenerate battle wounds more quickly than normal.
SP: 300 | Trained: 1500 Honed: 3000 Mastered: 4500 Perfected: 6000

Magic Mastery
Effect: HST( STG5, 50%)
Description: Jack's mastery over the schools of magic is widely known. Because of his extensive experience. He is capable of entering into a state where singular chants seem to have more effect upon a spell. Reducing his chant/channeling time.
SP: 1000 | Trained: 1500 Honed: 3000 Mastered: 4500 Perfected: 6000

| Matter |
Deconstruction Wave
Effect: DMG( STG 4) AOE(STG 3)
Description: A powerful spell that enables Jack to literally deconstruct people/objects at an atomic level with but a wave of his hand. The level of deconstruction, like most spells depends entirely upon Jack's level of magical power. So while the wave may be able to completely deconstruct certain things, others may only be partially deconstructed, resulting in a grave wound.
SP: 750 | Trained: 1750 Honed: 3500 Mastered: 5250 Perfected: 7000

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